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Post by robogiant on Fri Jun 12, 2009 1:27 pm

my first story(-_-)

main characters:

robogiant: the villain

robberbarron: the bloxer

it was a dark and stormy night at blox ville that night... the children were inside evryone was sad except robogiant the evil ruler of the land
robogiant:ha pathetic fools they are busy moaping in there homes while i am planning the largest killing spree roblox has ever seen! Well all i need for this contraption is a large base alot of guards and some scientists...

end of chapter 1 part 1
i will make chapter 1 part 2 tommorow be sure to tune in then!


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Re: Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer

Post by RobberBaron on Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:28 am

but as robogiant strolled off feeling happy with himself someone was whatching... someone knew robogiant oh too well... his name was robberbaron the town hero the hero who had cotrolled the plague and slain the zombie (but we will get to that in the next story) he was whatching roboiant his eyes narrow and his fists clenched he knew robogiant wouldent rest until the whole of robloxia was destroyed!

He knew he had to take action now there wasnt much time left he crept towards the mountain which robogiant was statanding on and began the perilous journey up the mountain where the old lab used to be

read more tommorow in (story 1 chapter 1 part 3)


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Post by scarletrouge on Thu Nov 04, 2010 11:33 am

Spelling/grammar corrections:
1Whatching-watching
2robogiant oh to well-robogiant only too well
3town hero the hero-town hero,the hero
4cotrolled-controlled
5roboiant-robogiant
6his eyes narrow and his fists clenched-his eyes narrowed and his fists clenched
7statanding-standing
8wouldent-would'nt
9time left he crept-time left, he crept

I really should proof read your work... Very Happy
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Post by RobberBaron on Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:13 pm

This was from ages ago. I'll fix his grammar, but keep the original copy Smile

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Post by scarletrouge on Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:06 am

No, you wrote that.
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Post by RobberBaron on Tue Nov 09, 2010 12:34 pm

No, [i]I[/i] did not, this was Robert's work. Notice how it is in the User Projects forum.

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Post by scarletrouge on Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:34 am

Didn't you notice it says 'by RobberBaron on Sat Jun 13, 2009 11:28 am'?!
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Post by RobberBaron on Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:54 pm

There's a very good reason for that. I will explain later, but for now you'll have to trust me.

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