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Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer
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Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer
my first story(-_-)
main characters:
robogiant: the villain
robberbarron: the bloxer
it was a dark and stormy night at blox ville that night... the children were inside evryone was sad except robogiant the evil ruler of the land
robogiant:ha pathetic fools they are busy moaping in there homes while i am planning the largest killing spree roblox has ever seen! Well all i need for this contraption is a large base alot of guards and some scientists...
end of chapter 1 part 1
i will make chapter 1 part 2 tommorow be sure to tune in then!
main characters:
robogiant: the villain
robberbarron: the bloxer
it was a dark and stormy night at blox ville that night... the children were inside evryone was sad except robogiant the evil ruler of the land
robogiant:ha pathetic fools they are busy moaping in there homes while i am planning the largest killing spree roblox has ever seen! Well all i need for this contraption is a large base alot of guards and some scientists...
end of chapter 1 part 1
i will make chapter 1 part 2 tommorow be sure to tune in then!
Last edited by RobberBaron on Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:36 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Title fix)
robogiant- Posts : 4
Join date : 2009-06-12
Age : 27
Location : swindon
Re: Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer
but as robogiant strolled off feeling happy with himself someone was whatching... someone knew robogiant oh too well... his name was robberbaron the town hero the hero who had cotrolled the plague and slain the zombie (but we will get to that in the next story) he was whatching roboiant his eyes narrow and his fists clenched he knew robogiant wouldent rest until the whole of robloxia was destroyed!
He knew he had to take action now there wasnt much time left he crept towards the mountain which robogiant was statanding on and began the perilous journey up the mountain where the old lab used to be
read more tommorow in (story 1 chapter 1 part 3)
He knew he had to take action now there wasnt much time left he crept towards the mountain which robogiant was statanding on and began the perilous journey up the mountain where the old lab used to be
read more tommorow in (story 1 chapter 1 part 3)
Last edited by RobberBaron on Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:36 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Removed admin comment)
Re: Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer
Spelling/grammar corrections:
1Whatching-watching
2robogiant oh to well-robogiant only too well
3town hero the hero-town hero,the hero
4cotrolled-controlled
5roboiant-robogiant
6his eyes narrow and his fists clenched-his eyes narrowed and his fists clenched
7statanding-standing
8wouldent-would'nt
9time left he crept-time left, he crept
I really should proof read your work...
1Whatching-watching
2robogiant oh to well-robogiant only too well
3town hero the hero-town hero,the hero
4cotrolled-controlled
5roboiant-robogiant
6his eyes narrow and his fists clenched-his eyes narrowed and his fists clenched
7statanding-standing
8wouldent-would'nt
9time left he crept-time left, he crept
I really should proof read your work...
scarletrouge- Posts : 39
Join date : 2010-06-11
Age : 27
Location : Here
Re: Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer
This was from ages ago. I'll fix his grammar, but keep the original copy
Re: Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer
No, you wrote that.
scarletrouge- Posts : 39
Join date : 2010-06-11
Age : 27
Location : Here
Re: Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer
No, [i]I[/i] did not, this was Robert's work. Notice how it is in the User Projects forum.
Re: Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer
Didn't you notice it says 'by RobberBaron on Sat Jun 13, 2009 11:28 am'?!
scarletrouge- Posts : 39
Join date : 2010-06-11
Age : 27
Location : Here
Re: Roblox Tales: Story Of A Bloxer
There's a very good reason for that. I will explain later, but for now you'll have to trust me.
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